All Comments on 'Not Your Typical Mother Ch. 01'

Too much story, not enough sex

Can't wait to see where you take this.

Promising but I’ll wait for next chapter before giving stars

You story has peaked my interest. Part 2 is needed. Hoping to see it soon.

Mother of the year!

Her daughter is on the edge of the abyss and mom is just watching...

Great beginning. Emily is a woman now. Smoking and humping.

A very promising start! Looking forward to the development in following chapters.

I hope there is a happy ending to this story? Looks like Chapter 2 has a lot of ground to make up and several directions this story could go. Let’s see how Chapter 2 goes.....

fuck yes. can't wait for the next part

Please let the lighter flicking sound be a crack pipe and the man her drug dealer/pimp!

Eh! Kind of droll and boring. I'll wait to give a rating.

It's called pacing guys. My stories are hundreds of pages long. Some very annoying comments from people who expect a person to go from innocent to smoking crack in the whore house in 3 pages. Get a grip. I write corruption stories, and to make corruption believable it needs to track in reality. If you have no taste or the intellect to understand that you can kindly go find something else to read.

Very good, mature beginning to a story. I guess (and hope!) it will become only darker and darker, just like your other works.

Don't mind the haters. Great story and excited for updates!

Love it!! Can’t wait for more :))

Another great begining hoping a long series like your others. Up to your usual standard.

Big fan of your work. Read almost every story.

Very well written, and well paced. The sense of despair and powerlessness in Danielle is palpable. The description of her arousal, and its source, is very erotic.