All Comments on 'Notorious Ch. 08'

I just wanted to say, I am in love. lol. It is a pleasure to read your work. The stories are very real and well written. Thanks for sharing your talent.

I suggest reading stories out loud before submitting them. The story had a few continuity problems, e.g. "Within a year of breaking up with her she heard he was married with children." How did he get married and have multiple children in less than a year? I will say that unlike so many bi characters, your protagonist is not a chauvinist, and does not fall into the "women are superior lovers" trap. I always found that offensive. Men and women are simply different, and you understand that. Bravo. : - ))