All Comments on 'Now What Ch. 02'

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jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Okay

But some real holes in the action.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Really, Really Bad Chapter

"Well Steve, I've got it from good sources, you won't be disappointed." Just where did he find the 'good sources' and where did she learn to give a blowjob like that, assuming of course it really was her? She really thought setting up a bondage scene, pretending to be a black hooker was going to lead to reconnecting the love in their marriage. Shit, she's dumber than he is and I ever was. Good thing they haven't had kids because they'd be too stupid to breathe. I'd be looking for new friends too. Signed: BTW

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

He tries to talk with her. He bears his heart. She expects him to read her mind. If only he was psychic it all could have been avoided. She did what she did in a last ditch effort to hurt him as much as possible before she left. She was never going to change. But she finally gave him the sex he wanted not to love him but wanting to hurt him. Her last words should have been for herself.

MarkT63MarkT63almost 4 years ago
Serve her!!

Bitch is nuts.!!!

whateverittakeswhateverittakesalmost 4 years ago
They deserve each other

How shallow can he be? He throws away a beautiful wife and great marriage just because she won't suck his dick?? And what does she expect? Did she think he was going to call out her name while she was blowing him? Her response is so outta there that she was never going to give him another chance anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What now?

Call the cops and file charges. He's got the handcuffs, her fingerprints and DNA and the ligature marks from the cuffs. At least he'll get a better split of the marital assets.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
She didn't do it

He still didn't get a blowjob from her. The bitch had another girl do the bj and anal. That is the only way she stays in character. He tried to get her to understand, but she is way too selfish.

Good story, reasonably written.

detroitdave

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good riddance.

If she is too stupid to realise that of course he fucked her, since he thought she a prostitute, she is not worth being married to.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Deb’s logic is crap!

whateverittakeswhateverittakesalmost 3 years ago

Even bigger head case...

NitpicNitpicover 2 years ago
He

He is one selfish arrogant twat.Also given their history,why would Debbie learn all her new tricks.?

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 2 years ago

"I wanted to know if you were ready to talk." - Isn't she the one refusing to talk?

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

They're both kind of nuts. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Bad story ending wtf dod she expect he was blind folded

lujon2019lujon2019almost 2 years ago

I'm confused

if she doesnt want to do it why would she care if he gets it elsewhere

now he should have been honest about it before cheating so deserves to get divorced, but he should have left her before cheating

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This gal would not give a BJ and the arguement drove them apart. So now on his B'day she fills all of her holes with him. Wonder where she suddenly learned her previously unwilling to perform lessons. Why the whip? She has had many experiences and lessons in sex practices after Steve departed. Is Deb now a slut,a bitch, or a combination of the two, a bitchy slut. LP

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyover 1 year ago

I’m sorry… but what a bitch! I’m going to divorce you… but first I am going to trick you into thinking I am someone else while having great sex with you… then I am gonna leave you because you like the sex. Give me a beak. A woman with a mental health problem… or worse. Thank-you very much… I enjoyed this read

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesover 1 year ago

Got my expected twist with Debbie as Candy. Now to Part 3 to see how it plays out. Seems to me Debbie is being a BITCH . thanks for your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Even blindfolded, I think I would recognize my wife’s voice.

NitpicNitpicover 1 year ago
Why

Why,with her attitude would Debbie even consider becoming Candy and how did she learn all the moves in such a short time?.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Ridiculous. Wife won’t give him a blow job. But then she gives him fantastic one. Really? Guess she was a total bitch to begin with. Better to dumper her and move on.

HighBrowHighBrow9 months ago

Pretty obvious ploy there.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

If she was so dead set against playing for fun, there's no way she could have done those things when she was 'Candy'.

He was wrong to betray his wife... Hell... WRONG in all caps. He should have divorced her first. No excuse. But for her to be doing what she did, after refusing to even consider his feelings to maintain her marriage, makes her worse.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Now what? Run, sign the papers and get the hell away from this psycho. What part of that scenario had 'anything' to do with love? What did she truly expect to hsppen? Curious how she got so good at things she refused to do, eh?

Run! No woman is worth this crap.

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal19695 months ago

this Deb chick is nuts. Of course he was just using her holes for pleasure, he thought she was a prostitute.

buzzsawlennybuzzsawlenny2 months ago

I don't understand? She blindfolded him, tied him up, acted like someone else, then screwed him, but was mad that he enjoyed it? She wanted him to relent and beg her not to bang him? What was her endgame? I mean she's right he can't be trusted, but not for the reasons she listed.

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