All Comments on 'Nude Beach Dare'

Great story, well written and and captivating.

Some of the best decriptive writing I've seen on this site in a while. I've been in similar situations with several of my girlfriends, including my-now wife, although the situations were not nearly so public, and the other men were not complete strangers. Sexual pleasure sometimes has a 'mind' of its own, regardless of 'propertarian' social conventions. It seem that a certain amount of sexual freedom ultimately served to enhance the couple's love for each other. 5*s

Very shallow plot;; virtually nothing from female point of view.

Very good plot, and I like this type of first-person narrative. It's a great story as told by the story writer's point of view, and doesn't assume to know how everyone else feels or what they want, only what that narrator sees.

5!

Well written for a first time story, nice build up and believable.

Great story masterfully told, thank you for sharing with us

Horny story. My wife and I had similar fun on the nude beach a few years ago. We both cum lots, especially her and it was so erotic and sensual. We both enjoy seeing lots of cum ejaculating into and over her.

Very good story, well written.

Great story - very erotic and well told. As hot as it was I can’t help but think about the aftermath - will it be a domino tipped or consequences be damned.

Wow! Pretty hot story!

Great job! Hope to see more stories from you soon

Good story, if you like to treat your gf as a bitch. You both will damn that moment in the aftermath

For a first attempt, I thought hat you hit a grand slam. Well written with a great balance of erotica and reality. Your male character's mental process with what was happening was refreshing and well written. Keep at your craft. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Such a hot story of watching your woman be taken by many men and be filled with cum. A beautiful experience every couple should share! Loved the hesitancy of allowing her to used and covered with cum, and showing how much she enjoyed cum and being the center of attention. Make a cumslut your wife and you will be happy forever! :) More please!

The story got me horny as its a big fantasy of mine to watch guys enjoying my wife on a nudist beach .

Wow, what an AWESOME STORY. It was well written because you could actually imagine what was going on at anytime.

Thanks to everyone who has commented, your insights and observations are much appreciated! I feel encouraged and motivated to continue writing after the great feedback.

I loved it! Keep them cumming.

Perfectly crafted story, and not just for a first submission. I look forward to reading more from you.

Wow! This is simply amazing. Although I would have appreciated that the German guy not having sex with Amber. Just watching and groping Amber. But I really liked the controlled environment you created where we could simply exercise our physical desires safely without any repercussions I guess. I also really like the teasing situation they created where he was showing off Amber's masturbation to both of them.

Marked down one star because of ageism. Especially…. but not so old as to be creepy.

But that said great great great first story

We really want to continue the story and the participation of new participants, including girls!

Sounds like I'd be stroking myself too

Fun, sexy, HOT story. Read this before, and went and read it again after reading your Gloryhole Oops (which was also hot as fuck). This was even better the second time around, thanks for posting!

hot story, well written

Awesome story, realistic and erotic. I once saw a woman masturbate at a nude beach; hottest thing ever.

very hot sexy story. I'd love for my wife to share one like this with me.

Great story, especially for your first submission; well structured, sexy, great erotic imagery.

I would love to see my wife admired like that on a public beach; very hot, arousing, and well done.

Great writing and situation