by TxRad
Just the kind of story one expects dear TxRad to deliver - fun, personable characters with plenty of well described action. A pleasure to read.
Some minor editing issues, like 'to' vs 'too' here and there, but other than that, fun read even if the 'nude day' thing is comically unlikely for most of the real world.
21 groans and 6 shivers on the first page. 65 groans and 16 shivers total. It seems to be getting at least a little warmer in Texas.
Luvvvved it !!! I hope it continues to fill us with details when they get back home.
Stop using the word "groan" so often. Overusing the same word in almost evey sentence sticks out like a sore thumb.
I really really liked this story. It hit all my hot buttons.
- outdoors
- nudity
- camping
- skinny dipping
- sex.
- and the best was the sibling sex
Ah Nude Day! My favorite day of the year and TxRad delivers yet another gem! Life is good!
Cheers
SAGE
Honestly should've added Katy later on. I'd have preferred just the sibs for the first few times together. Katy just seemed kind of annoying and in the way
I liked the story, the sex was good, the only the only thing that stopped it from getting a 5 was the use of she groaned he groaned they groaned, she moaned he moaned they moaned she whimpered he whimpered they whimpered, ok we get it.
Good premise and creative writing but the story was banter only. Nothing real to it.
I'm not really into incest stories but you really mage this work. Hot as hell, even if a bit unfair to the spirit of nudism, which is very non-sexual. What's Jimmy taking to keep it up like that? I want some.
Wonderful .. you got me do hot and wet that I might wear out my toys before I am done .. look out whoever comes to visit 😘 😝 😁 part 2 would work well .. thank you
Great story, would love to see how this relationship goes forward once they all get to college. Maybe they could get to use more than just a ball gag…
I know almost every story has people asking for more, but this feels like it could be a series.