All Comments on 'Nude Day Trouble'

hope to see more of this maybe??

Classic. Cheers 🥂

Another hot and well done story. This Texas heat has been brutal.

Hell, after awhile, I lost track of who was eating whom. One thing I do know is that he only fucked Dixie, which is too bad.

Awesome story! 5 stars!

Brilliant

Based on the story info, it's safe to assume, with 4 girls in the story, that there's going to be a lot of lesbian sex. Therefore, the story already sucks and isn't worth the time. Keep it straight or don't even bother. 1*

Loved it

Just think about all the time you will have for the ladies when you do retire!

Just don't retire from writing! Love your fantasies and style of yarn spinning.

Cheers

SAGE

OMG……so hot. I was aroused as soon as the nudity started. Especially with dad and his daughters together. I came 3 times while reading this story. Father / daughter and sibling sex is all hot.

It got wildly confusing once in a while, but who gives a hoot!/. Fun all the way.

Awesome story, and it brought back some fond memories.

Way too much mentioning of lip licking.

Fantastic romp :)

good romp

Ended kind of abruptly

Since this was in the incest category, it would not have been out of place to graphically expand the daddy/daughter combinations. The end was pretty abrupt, like you just decided to give up on it. I gave 5 stars for what you had written, but to leave it a is, is really unsatisfying.

Another master class from the king. Some great ideas stored away for my next attempt.

Hope to see more chapters of this it’s a good read but need more “incest” so to speak

6 pages and you only have sex with one of the four and it wasn't even one of the daughters? what a waste of time. 2/5

A typically good raunchy story from the author. Love the style and, yes, the ending might have been quite abrupt there's plenty of time, options and ideas to create a couple more stories as it goes further, especially with Jenny. I'd doesn't say if she kept her virginities nor does it mention her getting married???

34 shivers, 100 groans, 20 lip licks.

Ohh. My. Most excellent