All Comments on 'Nude Expectations'

And?

Huh? Hope this goes somewhere.

Ha ha, you do know what floor walking is?

Short but possibilities.

Thanks for the comments. I'm not sure if I should have made it clearer but this story is in the 750 word project.

Short and sweet. Hope there are more chapters to come.

I will echo the comment below that there is potential in this beginning. I wouldn’t think the 750 word challenge is negated if you write a part 2 etc. But I see your point: the story as presented is a lovely scene as it stands.