All Comments on 'Nude Secretaries Day: Reporting Live'
by Totzman
- 17 Comments
Anonymous9 months agoReactions to the live tv show should have been more like Richard seeing Monica naked and frat house Julie(I mean seeing her naked ) why mention it when it does not really matter. Same with Tess who has less inhabiton to strip before camera and does not give much about it, the femdom incest (Was seen before) impragnation was also not something I expected from the nude secretary day.I don't care about Matt(he is not much of a character) so I don't feel Monicas decision. Nick and Monica where a better pair. Beginning of the story is good middle is OK end is (much is rushed buildup was not met like Richard has nearly the same scene like Matt,no real struggle/reluctance to be naked infront of a camera live on tv.A competition between secretarys and between male saff for bonuses, goodies, bet could have made some things hotter or interesting. Raunchy stuff I thought that might happen like a blowbang, gangbang, double penetration, normal anal not the treesome did not happen blowbang of Shari was not much discribed. Characters that are buildup over the series are Monica, Albert, Nick, Shari, the rest of the office Mike,Heidi and Co, Characters that needed more characterizing Matt and family, Julie(not as much as Matt but her relationship with Ryan and the frat lies now behind her) , Tess and TV crew). It's a 3 out of 5 and lastly no anal for Monica 🤔I thought this is the year Albert(if not the whole office ) fucks her finally up the Ass. Story is good written👍
Anonymous9 months agoI agree with all the comments for the critic some things are true but but(t) Monicas story is not over so there is potantial for more.I like Romance, tastes are different and Alpha Theta Zeta are in same Universe!
For Totzman I like your storys Nude Secretary Day, NUDE SECRETARIES DAY: THE NEW GIRL, MAYBE SHE'LL SAY YES, Spank a Waitress, GIRLS WEAR SWIMSUITS, BOYS GO NUDE, and Sharking Day 1 and 2.
Anonymous9 months agoHmm is Monica going to merry or will she continue to assist the office pun intended
Anonymous9 months agoGreat addition to the series. Love to see Monica volunteering at Bakery with her sis-in-law nude to boost sales.
BTW, it looks like someone may be pirating your work.
https://www.amazon.com/NUDE-SECRETARIES-DAY-REPORTING-LIVE-ebook/dp/B0CFCK71HM/ref=sr_1_1?keywords=NUDE+SECRETARIES+DAY%3A+REPORTING
BigSyd_20237 months agoThis a great series! Some ideas for continuing: 1) Having other companies do marketing and show them how they do NSD too. 2) show the bakery hiring naked gals. 3) Tess asking Monica/Matt for a live in threesome or something like that. 4. The battle with the FCC over them TV station and the public demanding more nudity. 5) The families want to more about where the people work at. Please keep the series going, I really like it.
Anonymous7 months agoWould have gave it 5 stars but Maria at the bakery never got nude and she is the one answering the phones. She is the only lady who keeps her clothes on, not cool.
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Just Kidding. Fantastic chapter!
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Odds are Marie joins Monica and Olivia in only an apron out of solidarity, it being good for business and as a reaction to finding out her husband actually got to use his hall pass. If she would have thought he had even a remote chance in hell she would have never agreed to it, as if Russel Crowe would ever be available for her.
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Wonder what was happening at that boutique that got in on the holiday previously.
Also had been wondering if we would see a follow up to Sharking Day, and you thru the frat boys in the background. Again Great work, always looking forward to your stories.
Totzman4 months agoAuthor>When will be the next nsd?
I have no idea right now. This last one was tough to write. I have a few other projects in the works so I'd guess in a few years.
