All Comments on 'Nudist Adventures Ch. 01'

Well, I'm in. Looking forward to what happens with these crazy kids.

Both Rob and Dani seem to have engaging personalities that I would be interested to learn more about. A seemingly odd pairing, I'm looking forward to how each handles the out of the ordinary situation.

More please, such a great start...

I write longer postcards. I presume it is a teaser but it doesn't go far enough in description or character building - and if this is to be the length of future episodes, then who can be bothered to read them. It is hardly paragraph one rather than chapter one.

Don’t listen to the haters! Yeah, it was a little short, but the smart ones of us realize that this was simply an intro and future chapters will have more depth. Can’t wait to see where Dani and Rob’s future adventures might lead!!!

I gotta know how this turns out

Looking forward to part 2

A good start. Gave you 5*s to encourage you.

oh no... the future chapters never came!

Great beginning! Let's have some more chapters...