All Comments on 'Nudist Beach Humiiation'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

He would be justified killing all xoncerned. It happened in a highly agitated state and a plea of temporary insanity due to his own family turning on him in such a despicable fashion just pushed him over the edge. The last thing he remembered was the sound of his cheating wife fucking another man. Next thing he remembered was the bloody knife in his hand and everyone else dead of multiple stab wounds and slit throats. He didn't remember cutting off Leon's dick and shoving it down his throat. Likewise, there was no recollection of stabbing all the cheating, heartless bitches in their cunts. It was all just a blank. 6 months later, after assuring the authorities that such a preposterous set of circumstances could never happen again and he was no danger to society, he's released from treatment and free to find a not crazy woman to love and respect him.

pathetic_cuckpathetic_cuckabout 2 years ago

Boy this one went from hint of discomfort to BDSM slave beating in the span of a sentence! lol

I enjoyed the first part and just kind of skimmed through the rest once the "twist" happened. That kind of dramatic switch in the fiction takes me out of it and it just becomes noise.

Those Anon comments are something eh? I feel like there must be a mental hospital that lets their patients come onto this site to comment.

cdCindy1cdCindy1about 2 years ago

please continue. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that Dave gets to suck on Leon's BBC and swallow all his juicy cum -- doing it all in front of his wife and daughters. That is what i would love to do.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

"Your little dick has turned us into Leon's sluts"

LMFAO Classic

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I NEED MORE IMMEDIATELY

TooSmallDaveTooSmallDaveabout 2 years agoAuthor

I just wanted to apologise for the typo in the title. I only just noticed it. I can't believe I misspelled the very word that forms the basis of all my depraved fantasies!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Dave daughters will enjoy getting fucked off leon. When Leon has filled them with his cum Dave gets on his hands and knees and cleans them as Leon fucks his arse hard.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

para cuándo tiene previsto continuar?. Creo que León, la esposa y las hijas tienen que humillar mucho más a Dave. Incluso exhibir su humillación para que todos puedan a su vez humillarlo.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Proud of my small dick and the various comments i have gotten the first ever from a girl who told me im used to bigger. I dont envy men with bigger penises as i would only want what i have or be able to make mine smaller

TooSmallDaveTooSmallDavealmost 2 years agoAuthor

Hi anonymous. I would so love to have a bigger dick. I wish I could make a woman cum by fucking her. I can't even imagine how good it must feel to feel a woman shudder with an orgasm because i was fucking her. I have a really small dick and I wish it was not so. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I love the idea of a hot girl seeing me and giggling. What can I say. When I was set up with a sure thing, some time after a bad breakup, the 20 something said: oh…look how cute! The sure thing turned into a thumb and forefinger and I was squirting all over myself and she was fully dressed.

rickylaw01rickylaw016 months ago

What a stupid unbelievable story. Why did everyone miraculously show up on their private walk? Stupid story with a dumb plot.

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I started writing stories about sex in 2020. Heaven's knows why; it's not as though I haven't got enough to be getting on with. Most of what I write is totally fictional. The only thing in my stories that's true to my real life is that I do have a very small penis like the mal...