All Comments on 'Nudist Camp Initiation'

You've kept the narrative quite tight and it reads fairly well (the main hiccough was your use of "disburse" - as in the distibution of cash - where you meant "disperse"), but you can hardly introduce two such hot girls and leave it at that. After all, George hasn't fucked the delicious Cindy yet.

I said this and she said that and she said this and she said that. Almost nothing but quotation marks. Seriously, it's like reading a transcript. Maybe try paraphrasing next time.

Interesting he assumed her threesome had been with another couple, not two guys.

Ending was to abrupt, so sorry it only just made a 4 with more to it, then it would be an easy 5.

My wife and I are memebers at an adults nudist camping in Quebec, you'd love the place😈

Interesting. There really was a Seminole Health Resort (nudist club) that put on plays. There really was a Cindy who’s parents owned the place.