All Comments on 'Nurse Sally and the Soldier'

by ThePiper146

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Not bad, but a bit matter of fact, tab A in slot B. More detailed descriptions of the action would make it better.

ThePiper146ThePiper1464 months agoAuthor

Useful comment and quite correct.

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