by nikopheros
That was really erotic and went in a direction I hadn't expected. I figured the guy would wake up and it would be more about him. Having him be more of a prop for these two women to explore their sexualiry is really interesting.
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Thank you for writing!
Agree with shadrach. This story went in a different way than I was expecting. It started out fast and pretty hot.
Then it got 100 xs hotter! Starting with letting us know that Stephanie is packing some serious weaponry under her scrubs top but never being blatant about it, we are left to piece that together. Now, they were big, Fisher-Price sized puzzle pieces with arrows pointing at where to link them, but that's not the point. It was just the fact that the writer left the canvas on the easel and we got a peek but a promise that there is more to come.
Then my second favorite box was checked, and thats the addition of a second female who helped check off the third box that makes my list: very hot girl/girl action.
I eagerly await the next chapter.
5 well-deserved stars from me.
Very reminiscent of spinal meningitis is no joke, but more from the nurse’s side. I’m here for it though
A continuation of the first chapter, with added attraction and action between two nurses. I wasn't surprised by the plotline change, and I suspect it will change again in the next chapter. I believe fucking an unconscious man is on the horizon.
Liked Jackie and Steph a lot...! for that matter nurses in general...once dated a nurse-she was great,...!
Gladys can go suck a lemon...
Looking forward to next Ch
easy 5/fave