All Comments on 'Nursed'

1. Given that the guy was drugged and out of it, it would be cool to see a follow up where he actually asks for more of the same treatment (humiliation, vulnerability, and nurturing). I feel you've laid the groundwork for him to realize he wants it. Asking for it would be naughty, submissive, and humiliating.

2. If his wife works but he's commanded to take bed rest, then that's a fine enough reason for Sister Matheson to continue taking care of him at home. She can slowly add constraints, and he can slowly accept what he wants. But the story could also be told from her point of view, if she's a little naughty too.

3. If we have a "nice mommy," then I think it would be cool to reveal the wife as a "mean mommy." She may not be "sympathetic," but she could still be her husband's soul mate.

What a fantastic story, best I've read in along time!

more please

This is a great story. Weird for sure, but funny and sexy. Please write some more and finish this one off!

Great story that has so many possibilities so please continue. If you do, may I request that he becomes fully aware of his future humiliations.

It should be. Most enjoyable!

When an author writes an observation, which the reader finds it life like, he gets pretty impressed. Normally only great authors give those life's observations. LLBFITY has shown, he is capable in enlighting us. For example, take this-

"if only all wives and mothers would do that to their husbands and sons, men would be much better behaved".

Thanks

I liked this story but I'm damned if I know why. Please, don't leave us hanging! Write some more, bring us some closure.

Don't know why but found this strangely erotic..different from the usual wham bam crap on here.

Very good start with great potential i think.

keep going

I would like to read more.