by NzWiccan
Wow! I am utterly spent & speechless. You write beautifully. Such a gift. Thank you.
Ah (wo)man, this is one hot story. This is the stuff dreams or at least, fantasies are made of: making out with an exotic beauty that make your eyes weep and your mouth drool. The ending took a bit of a mythological turn but I'm ok with that. It's worth the read
I am sorry to say this but your ending sucks if this is truly where you end the story as you leave it wide open for more. It would be nice if you were to add more to this story.
I'm expecting the story to go right, but you go left into a whimsical dream realm..
Lesbian _ Penelope.
that was absolutely delicious. magical, mystical and so sensual and erotic. only the beginning, I hope. very well written and creative. looking forward to more of this wonderful story. thank you for sharing your gift.
I can't describe what I am feeling for this, it was that amazing. You, my dear, have a gift with words. Keep on writing.
like sticky sweet ambrosia sliding down my tongue. you have a gift with words. this story deserves further treatment....
Thanks for the story. That was one of the best written, exquisitely paced and nicely erotic. I look forward to more from you.
The most exquisitely written piece I've ever read. Not one word too many and not one word missing. Beautiful. Thank you.