by Diabless
IF this is a fictitional story why bother saying everyone is over 18?it really dosn`t make any sense.
This story got me so hard, was hot seeing him take them all orally and get them addicted to his cum. I hope there's a second part, he's been wanting to take their asses all story and would be hot to see them live together as a family
It was okay, but it went perilously close to just being over the top. I mean... I get the guy is a horn dog, but for him to be able to cum THAT often, almost on command? It was kind of silly and took away from the hotness factor.
Excellent story, want more please. Need the MC awake to properly appreciate mom's mouth.
There are elements of a good story in there, but all in all, it's just too over the top. A guy doesn't have to grab his cock everytime it gets hard, openly jerking off into food while still believing to be discreet is pretty much delusional, constantly molesting sleeping siblings and shoving a dick into their mouth is more creepy than sexy (I don't expect big speeches about consent, but seriously, make it a bit less rapey), the MC comes across rather selfish (really? just eating pussy once), he also apparently has to learn that a dick can go into a pussy... and basically all characters don't act believable in the slightest, not really knowing if they try to be inconspicuous, but teasing, or openly horny.
I love it, I do hope you add more to the story and write more stories in general.
It's a story, regardless of the fact your two moms in real life ask you to address them by their first names, in the story it's just moronic.