All Comments on 'Obsessing Over You, Beautiful!'

I loved the story but not the cliff hanger ending. I hoping that means it’s a part two 🤞

amazing

Yes, part 2 please! You're an excellent writer. KEEP GOING!!!

What happens next. I did t like the cheating. Would have preferred if Jayden and Suzie had just drifted apart and separated before the sessions with Amber started. It makes both of the main characters assholes, I fear. But the rest of the story was super hot. So now be honest with Suzie and be together as a couple.

It was/is fabulous! So well written. I was as hooked on them as the characters were on each other.

There MUST be more! PLEASE

Need a part 2 for sure!!!!

Your descriptions and imagery are amazing and love the dirty talk. Very much looking forward to future stories of yours.

@ LoveSoul

There will be a Conclusion soon :)

@anon:

There will be a twist to this cheating :)

@Dpj49

Thank you so much! There will be a Conclusion next week, so keep in touch :)

@Straycatndc

Than you so much! I love dirty talk also, but I can go over the top and very cringy with that, as I did in my "Gay-only-for-you" stroy. I'm aware not everybody like that, so I appreciate your comment even more!

Fantastic very well written! I think Susie clearly understands that the relationship has changed. Can’t wait to see what happens next!

@Sunnydaze361

I'm so glad you liked it, and the conclusion will be there soon ;)

Please please continue. Susan is obviously bored so they are really basically broken up and he just needs to say it. I thought he was going to say it before the text was received regarding Alex.

Fuck, that story has this 58 yr old cock hard as a rock

I’m glad you finally fucked him

@JacknJohn, It's nice to hear that, I'm glad I could be of help :)

Loved it. It was hot! But we need a sequel!!! Who does Jayden choose?

Hot, hot, hot! I SOO wanna be Amber... :-)

This was a really great story! I hope. if you write more about them. that they become boyfriends and full time lovers.

@Riki1942

I wrote one part of the second chapter, but still can't find a strength to finish it :D

I have arrived late to this story and must say that is a superb study in obsession, totally believable, well paced and involving.

The story ends prematurely and is left in mid-air and I am really sorry that you cannot take it further.

It seems to me that both Amber and Jayden are monogamous by nature and a logical progression from obsession through friendship to love would be an overwhelming experience for the reader. Unfortunately it seems that it might be too big an ask of the author, which seems a shame given the same process in some of your other stories.

Of course your readers will have played it out themselves. In my mind's eye I keep replaying a scene when Jayden comes out to his parents who are so kind and supportive that his Gynaecologist father takes them to his hospital and conducts a rectal examination to make sure that Jayden has not already damaged Amber! And sperm count to make sure that he will have some grandchildren!

I have arrived late to this story and must say that is a superb study in obsession, totally believable, well paced and involving.

The story ends prematurely and is left in mid-air and I am really sorry that you cannot take it further.

It seems to me that both Amber and Jayden are monogamous by nature and a logical progression from obsession through friendship to love would be an overwhelming experience for the reader. Unfortunately it seems that it might be too big an ask of the author, which seems a shame given the same process in some of your other stories.

Of course your readers will have played it out themselves. In my mind's eye I keep replaying a scene when Jayden comes out to his parents who are so kind and supportive that his Gynaecologist father takes them to his hospital and conducts a rectal examination to make sure that Jayden has not already damaged Amber!

Anyway it is good to see that you are still posting quality stories (Ginger) and maybe one day will be inspired to take Jayden and Amber a little further along life's journey

@Anon,

I have written a part of the next chapter, if you would be interested, I may send you this part privately on your email, but it wasn't edited in any way, so don't expect good grammatical quality :D

You can write to me using my mail (it is given in my BIO) but please add your mail so I could respond.

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I'm planning to add it one day as a conclusion "Obsessing over you... : Finale" or smth like that, but I would need an editor, and that's a hard part(finding editor), believe me :)

Another great story with the most amazing sex at the very end. Thank you and once again I'm left very wet in my hand and on my cock - fabulous! I'm going to be very busy in January but will definitely keep my eye on your stories for anything new. I so, so want to exchange emails with you and will probably succumb in February to my ever increasing sexual urges. Nigel

Nigel, thank you so much and I wait for your mail impatiently - but please remember to give me your email address so I could reply - and check Spam folder as it often catches new mails :)

Outstanding job, yet again my friend! Feeding that natural curiosity of Jayden, who is a sexual creature with genuine horny curiosity with Amber whom he could see need help and perhaps a hero was soooo good. The build up was so erotic for us readers taking us on that journey of evolution for both of them. Bravo!, another 5 Stars!

@LoganPrejean337

Once again I thank you for your kindest words, I'm so glad you've enjoyed yet another one of my stories, I'm so honored and grateful!

Okay. Why do I get so wet so quickly just thinking about it?! Nigel.

Second chapter, now! Pretty please

Nigel, I have no idea, but it's good, right? :)

Yes Eraj, It is good, so very, very, very good. I'm so fucking wet again just thinking about it. God you know how to turn a guy on. Nigel.

Hell yes! Please finish the story. Thank you!

Amazing story. Can really relate as a "straight" male who is attracted to anything beautiful no matter wgat gender.

@anon, I am similar in that regard :) But even more important for me is to be on the same wavelength. If I fall for a person, it can be of either gender; it doesn't have to be beauty; the spark has to be present! :)

Omg not her coming to the house like I thought lol I love this one had to reread the 3 page like 6 times it was surprisingly hot

Omg it was so good! Do you plan on finishing it? I’d love to know what comes next! Please please finish it!

Ooooomg this story is SO HOT!!! I would love a part 2 please!

I read this entire story early in the morning while I should be getting ready for work. So hot. Made me wet. Yes, I'm a female and this made me hot and wet. Thank you. You are talented. Now what will happen when Susie find Jayden and Amber in bed?

@Anonymous

I'm glad it made you wet ;)

"Now what will happen when Susie find Jayden and Amber in bed?"

Well, in my head it was like that - she will do nothing of consequence, since she is also cheating on him (Amber knows it, that's why he had no objections in engaging in this strange situation) ;) I have a part already written, but I kinda lost momentum :/

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@SummerSammy

Thank you ;)

@Damondeville

We'll see about it ;)

Princera

6 times? It's a lot! :D I'm glad it... worked for you ;)

CLIFFHANGER!!! FUCK!!! That aside...great story, definitely would like a second part but I'm sure there's a good reason there isn't one. Still 5* but you've definitely improved since writing this, seems to be missing something that I can't put my finger on. Almost felt bad for the girlfriend but reading comments I guess she isn't going to turn out to be innocent. Never would've guessed.