by TheGraduate88
And I pump every could of hours . . . Couple ? A correctly spelled word would likely be accepted by spellchecker. This is more likely a typo.
More little things throughout the story. Answer: Proof Reading and Spellchecker app. Almost worth their weights in gold. Taking your efforts from good to ideal.
Excellent Mom Son story.
1. The Mom Son love's highest level is the inbreeding with the common newborn baby.
2. The each other assisting Mom Son couples are a good element too.
3. ANR's element is funny.
I am very curiouse the author could show the process of the pregnancy and the arriving of the newborn and future life. However the each other assisting MoM Son couples could help other Mom Son couples too.
The inbreeding genetic risk is very low against the common sense at first or second level inbreedings, If the family does not carrier any dangerouse gens as cystic fibrose, thallasemia, hemofilia etc the risk is only the Down or Edwards syndrome risk for the elder women. Generally the children will be healthy!
The ethernal cycle or more cycle as 5-10 cycle inbreeding risk begin to increase independently from the good genetic background. The main couse is the majority of the spontan mutations are negatives and the minority of the spontan mutatations are positives. Howver first and second cycle inbreedings are low genetic risk if the genetic background is good, as I wrote only the evry elder woman Down and Edwards syndrom will be risk. The up to date laboratory technics were invented and the Down and Edwards syndroms could be investicated with blood laboratory tests+
If the Author writes healthy kids for the two Mom son couples the Story could be true and not SciFi!