All Comments on 'Of Fiends and Misfortune Pt. 02'

by Ava_Harp

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TyrmerTyrmerabout 2 years ago

Thank god he got some relief eventually! Loved this installment too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your writing comes together very well, doesn't get bogged down in detail nor go too light on it, and flows really well from scene to scene. The way you write characters is great, giving them a lot of expressiveness in what they're thinking and feeling. Really good stuff, hope to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beautiful writing. So erotic reading about Jack's wanton need and eventul release.

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