All Comments on 'Office Banter Ch. 03'

As someone who used to work in a similar office the series is great. I've had my share of office fun but nothing quite like this! A couple of minor observations. As a reader I like a bit more detail in the descriptions of the sex. Some writers go into great detail about the office or what they are wearing etc then move too fast about the cocks, tits and pussy. And in Ch.1 moving back and forth between both perspectives was cool and worked. But now there are three and it just changes too much and is distracting. Either more time (words) each or something is needed to make it less busy. Not meant to be critical just helpful if anything. Great series.