by mtnman2003
i want more of this story. it made me so hot, i loved how forceful he was with her...but do pay more attention to details like spelling and scene development
Great - just what I need right now. I am a woman who likes it forceful and this story is fantastic.
There were numerous errors in the story, both logical, and grammatical/typo. But the sheer energy and ferocity that came through in the telling, carried it to a high where you let go of that as quibbles.
- JT
God damn that was a good story. Had my pussy dripping wet. Literally!
IMHO this story would be much hotter without the crude language and insults. Jim's position of authority is all that was needed to force Sara to have sex.