All Comments on 'Office Fantasy to Reality'

by mtnman2003

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
hot

Real good, my pussy is wet and I dream of you mtnman fucking me hard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
i'm so hot now

i want more of this story. it made me so hot, i loved how forceful he was with her...but do pay more attention to details like spelling and scene development

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great story

Hope you will write some sequels.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great

Great - just what I need right now. I am a woman who likes it forceful and this story is fantastic.

misocutemisocuteover 16 years ago
hee hee

Did that man just name his penis jasper?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Errors but hot!

There were numerous errors in the story, both logical, and grammatical/typo. But the sheer energy and ferocity that came through in the telling, carried it to a high where you let go of that as quibbles.

- JT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Damn

God damn that was a good story. Had my pussy dripping wet. Literally!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Crude Language and Insults

IMHO this story would be much hotter without the crude language and insults. Jim's position of authority is all that was needed to force Sara to have sex.

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