by Tempestmir
IMHO, very well written. With a longer story line, and an editor, I think you could go places.
What annoys me is the idea that looking at women is itself grounds for harassment. If most guys worry about that, that means they're basically outlawing masculinity. We have to fight that, guys. I don't mean we should go around staring at women's bodies. But noticing, and liking what you see - fuck 'em, if that's now illegal. It's time for a revolt.