by CreamStuffedTwink
I really like this one, the pacing and timing and the bit by bit as the criminal figures out what the limits are is really great.
I like this one a lot. The pacing and the step by step is really hot. I'd love to see this one keep going. Maybe Officer Tyla needs a career change or has a partner?
As far as grammar goes, it wasn't too bad. Now, I would probably make it more consensual by the end of it, unless you're leading into the next chapter or part, then that would make sense, but if you're going to have them keep doing sexual things I think it would be better if by the end of the day they're consensually together.