Offspring Ch. 043

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"From that moment on we became a target. They will want to know how we managed to establish contact with the mainland government and to whom we are talking there. To find out they need to infiltrate our organisation at the senior level. When I invited Bernice to Olympus as liaison officer I gave them the opportunity to do just that. By controlling Bernice we control their espionage efforts, at least that's the theory behind the scam."

***

The Tikana arrived in due course and set down next to the Pygmalion. After transferring Bernice to the Pygmalion Captain Gomez lifted the Tikana off again and set her down in the area where the other freighters were so her cargo could be unloaded and handed over to the Oktonians.

That evening we had dinner on the Pygmalion. I introduced Bernice and Captain Gomez to Pedro, Juan, Feng, George and Talla. Over drinks afterwards I informed Bernice that the Pygmalion was scheduled to leave for Olympus in the morning and that Talla, Juan and myself were staying behind with the Tikana who would have to remain in port for the next ten days to enable modifications to the vessel to be made and to take on cargo. She expressed disappointment.

I had arranged a room for Captain Gomez at my hotel. We left early. After booking our guest in we went to the bar for some more liquid refreshments. Julio Gomez turned out to be a jovial fellow with a wicked sense of humour. He was no foreigner to a good old fashioned piss up. We kept going late into the night swapping spacer stories. Julio got on well with Talla, treating her like a fellow spacer. For a joke he challenged her to a drinking competition. Talla accepted, on condition they only drank beer, since her metabolism couldn't handle wine or spirits. Throughout the night she matched him glass for glass.

When we broke up Julio was stinking drunk and Talla still stone cold sober. He got up on shaky feet, bowed to her and conceded defeat.

"Captain Talla," he said, kissing her hand, "You are the first creature to ever drink me under the table. I salute you."

Juan and I broke out laughing. I didn't have the heart to tell the old captain that Angels are impervious to the alcohol in beer.

***

We had a late breakfast, still battle weary from last night. I called Al and introduced him to Julio.

"Alright gentlemen,"I said, "let's go and have a look how the unloading is going."

An hour later we were on the Tikana. It was my first look at the interior of the ship. The cargo master informed us that unloading was on schedule and would be completed late that afternoon.

Captain Gomez introduced us to his crew of twelve and showed us around the ship. As expected the decor and fittings were simple and functional. There were thirty cabins in all to accommodate the crew and some passengers, which was the usual thing to be found on a vessel of this type. A fair sized galley and a mess room as well as an officer's mess that served as a conference room. The bridge was well equipped and spacious. He showed us the loading bay where we would install accommodation for up to two-hundred Angels and the customary Angel cafeteria.

I had wanted to install a separate galley for the Angels, but Talla pointed out that on the two day trip to Olympus her people could happily live on beer alone, which to them was food. With Jeremy's help the whole installation had been planned and all the material required was on stand by; courtesy Chang Corporation. Al would be in charge of construction. It would start as soon as unloading was complete.

There was one thing that surprised me about the Tikana. She was clean. I don't mean the sort of clean used spaceships get when they are up for sale, I mean really clean, you could eat off the floor with appetite anywhere on the ship. When I complimented Captain Gomez on that fact he said:

"This ship has been our home for a long time. We have treated her accordingly, with love and attention to detail. She may be an old girl, but she was our old girl. We've looked after her."

I assured him we would honour that tradition.

We stayed until the cargo was off the vessel. Julio's crew would work through the night to clean the cargo bays making her ready for official hand over in the morning.

Back at the hotel Julio asked us about Olympus. I showed him some footage of Talla and the agricultural project I had on my computer. He seemed impressed. We had a few drinks, nothing like the night before and went to bed early.

After breakfast we went back to the ship. There was little ceremony when we took possession of the Tikana. The handover was duly entered into the ship's log, signed by Captain Gomez and Talla and witnessed by Juan and myself. A message was dispatched to the Federation that as of this moment the Tikana belonged officially to Olympus Colonisation Command with Captain Talla in charge of the vessel.

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daves_not_heredaves_not_here7 months ago

It's a shame this is the last chapter.

This is a great series.

Unfortunately, as someone noted below, Talemaster was born in 1939, so it's likely that he passed away.

Talemaster was a great writer.

R.I.P.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
YBy6tm

For all the disappointed readers out there, if you go to Talemaster's biography you'll see he was born in 1939 so I think he passed away. As sad as it is that the story is not finished, dead people cannot write stories, or at least not on here. I just wish there was a way to get this story finished by someone else.

TK

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Thanks dear author,

It's a nice story, thanks again for a good one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Talemaster

I guess I'll have to agree with some of the previous readers that once again it's a wonderful story unfinished. So sad really.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This...

work is worthy of only the highest accolades...a true tragedy that is is not finished

R.I.P.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
End of the line!

As you can tell, author hasn't updated since 2012... and likely will not for obvious reasons... Way too many stories have been uploaded and never see completion due to disinterest... or even death...

RuckolderRuckolderover 6 years ago

An excellent story from the very beginning, well planned and written.

Eagerly awaiting further chapters.

CamoGreenDragonCamoGreenDragonabout 8 years ago
time to give up

welp i have held out hope this writer would return with more work but seeing as the least entry was 12/13/13 its just not looking good i have to say im truly disappointed this series never got finished i was reading every chapter as soon as it was released and was waiting to see how this was all going to play out.

I do hope the author is at lest ok but i have made several attempts to contact them through this sight with no answer over the years its not looking like we will ever get any new chapters so i guess its finally time to remove this one from my favorites list.

TY for the great stories tc of your self if your still alive

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
It's been two years, now, since this chapter was posted. I fear the worst,

that Talemaster has either died, or is no longer capable of writing, or communicating. He would have been 75 this year, and as his bio states, he was a smoker. It's likely we will never see this story finished by it's originator.

I wrote 15 or so chapters back this is an inherent problem with anonymity of Lit, as well as the nature of it's content. This is not the first epic tale on Lit I have come to the written end of, while still far short of the full story arc.

It is very, very difficult to pick a work where another author has stopped prematurely and do create by the story. Some well known, published authors have attempted to keep a franchise alive by taking on a co-writer while they still can work, and then hand it off to them. The only one I can think of who successfully pulled it off was the creator of the Conan books, (I'm REALLY diggin in my damaged brain's memory), but I believe it was Sprague deCamp. (I guess I could look it up on the 'net, but on this damn iPad mini, I often lose what's in the comment if I leave the tab, so I won't.)

It would be heartwarming, though, if Talemaster's family could understand the enormous talent and creativity the man possessed, and only truly discovered late in life. I think they would be overwhelmed if were to read the praise and adulation in the comments here on Lit.

I'm going to attempt to contact him via the feedback, if it's available to see if anything comes of it.

Here's to a talented writer, lost to us. Kudos, sir, job well done.

GeoD

eaglewolf1963eaglewolf1963almost 9 years ago
AWESOME

More please. Loved it!

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