All Comments on 'Offspring with Queen Mother Pt. 04'

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CrazyAddaCrazyAdda9 months ago

Hot hot hot. Super hot. Wow... That some story I have ever read in this site. Please continue this but mom shouldn't be sex with her older son. It's super hot mom only sex with dariyan. Sharing Mom is definitely minimise the hot this story have. Don't take too much time for next episode

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Yes bro hottest mom son story ever but please don't let nome touch the queen, only darian has the right to make love to her please its a request

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Overall, Great way of describing a historical incident and the writer is very efficient in unfolding the moments however he is a little late for enthusiastic reader like us. I am from poor part of Asia and don't have doller but I would shower a writer like A . F .S with diamond coz he/she is really unique .

ratimomratimom9 months ago

Wow what a story of ancient era of Prince and Queen relation. Deserves five star rating.

The sexual bond between Darian and Nymira becoming strong especially from Darian side. Nymira is doing it as a duty to the king but not giving him a chance to discharge when she is in her unsafe period. giving him a chance to discharge when she is in her unsafe period.

The whole game changed when Nome returns. Due to the return of Nome and his demand, Darians throne is at risk and Darian is at risk of losing his lady. Late king Inglude one day suggested Nome to continue serpent slyer with Nymira. In the past Nome was not ready but now interested in Nymira.

As well as it seems Nymira is positive towards Nome than Darian. Does she want to do only queen duties to new king Nome and kingdom or is she really interested in him? Why was she saving herself so as not to get pregnant from Darian for so many months?

Not able to understand Nymira's differential behavior for Darian and Nome.

But Darian somehow managed in the garden to fill Nymira with his potent seeds in her unsafe period on the clue of Lokir.

It is very much interesting to see what are the next moves in the story.

Thanks for submitting fourth part quickly. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Please publish earlier.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

What a story! So many twists.

Cant wait to read next chapters

Where are you writer bro?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This story has every materials of getting hooked.

Competition between darian and nomi to fuck the best exciting goddess.

Everyone wants Darian to win. I always had a question what if my mother was a goddess or super sexy girl. How would i feel then.

This story is like oxygen for your readers and please accept our request.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Darian Vs Nomi&Nymira

All the mystery and drama in this series are really interesting. One cant skip a single line.

Hatts off to writer

Please, no sharing with Nomi.

Nymira is the precious asset worth to fight for and precious asset will lose its value if more than one can have its possession.

I wish goddess Nymira gives birth to a goddess princess who will look as good as her mother and the princess daughter may have a lover but her father Darian will ultimately maker her his wife

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

This is fuckin' amazing dude. Please continue in the same tone!

Maybe even have Nymira and Nome have sex together even if the Queen mother knows Darian impregnated her. Just for the fun of it and to see how jealous that would make him. Knowing how dangerous and scheming he is maybe she is playing a game to ensure the safest environment for her upcoming child. May the better man win. Get Darian to seed his mother's royal cunt from behind, him holding onto her wide, fertile hips while the cheating seductress promises she will be faithful to him.

4095113814095113818 months ago

希望太后不要被夺抢走,她只属于达里安,

4095113814095113818 months ago

是的,希望没有人能碰太后,她只属于达里安,

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Darian's Primal Attraction vs. Nymira & Nymira Primal Attraction.

A true hero achieve not receive . lets see who is the real hero

Mom. It was either me or Nome.

Her silence spoke volumes, but the subtle play of emotions on her face confirmed his suspicions.

Darian needs to prove his worth by being better than nome and keeping Nymira as his slut and winning war in neighbouring countries.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

next part will be more interesting coz we will know what nmira is actually thinking and who of the 2 sons is her worthy

hurry up writer we cant wait

WOW BRAVO OUTSTANDING REMARKABLE UNBELIEVALE SUPERB

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

HOW RUDE FROM A MOTHER ! HOW CAN SHE DISCRIMINATE? THEY SAY MOTHERS LOVE IS PURE BUT HERE IT IS NOT . IF I WERE DARIAN I WOULD FUCK ROUGHLY & PASSIONATELY NYMIRA IN FRONT OF NOME 6 TIMES A DAY & CUT NOMI'S DICK .

I WOULD DRINK MILK FROM NYMIRA AGAIN AS A LOVER IN FRONT OF NOMI.

EVERYONE HAS WEAKNESS JUST FIND NOMI'S WEAKNESS AND BE RUTHLESS.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Nothing is more pleasurable than the company of a girl whom you deeply desire and whose figure , scent , sense of humor, and words significantly attract like you and if you don't get her it is more painful than death coz you are just suffering and getting the feeling of death every minute and every minute make you understand she wants someone else. let Darian win like Alexander the Great

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Darian can be a warrior ,win the heart of a beautiful princess then nymira will have a competitor

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Darian , Be the best and fuck the best and make others cuckold

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

DESTROY the Arrogance of NYMIRA and Nomi. SUFFER TILL YOU DONT GET YOUR DESIRED OBEJECTS.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

fuck nymira like a bitch and castrate nomi

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Make nymira your kept for 365 days and fuck her like a mad man and then she will be physically and mentally yours

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Cant wait for the next part . feeling helpless ,. Writer bro Afs please do something

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Story done!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Don't know may be writer is dead

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Comeback man

afs4afs48 months agoAuthor

I am alive!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Please 🥺 release part 5

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This story is getting better every chapter.

OI8U2OI8U224 days ago

I'm glad Darian finally got some good mother fucking accomplished. Maybe if Nymira tells Nome she likes Darian's cock fucking her pussy, Nome will go to Rome. 5 Stars

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