All Comments on 'Offspring with Queen Mother Pt. 05'

Great story，I hope that my mother will always belong to Darian, and I hope that mother and son can live happily together.

Part 6 will be the last one. Thank you everyone for reading and going through this journey with me.

Mind blowing story telling! Fantabulous!!

Love it! Thank you

Wow, no words. Supremely talented writing skill.

I feel i was watching the character & incidents before my eyes when reading.

Thanks a lot. At long last to give a very sexy dramatic update

Hope part 6 will come shortly as it is difficult to wait for such a lovely medieval type story.

Hats off to you, Sir, A.F.S.

What man just ruined a perfect story by making nymira getting nailed by nome why man was Darian not enough for her thought it was a perfect mom son story.

Man disappointed

u missed an insanely amazing possibility of Darian drinking Nymira's breast milk. It would have taken the story to unbelievable levels of perfection.

Please don't be a contrarian and let Darian lose at the end. Let him be the one to continue Serpent Slayer line.

people are upset with Nome getting it on with Nymira however in my headcanon Nome is a wimp with micropenis and couldn't satisfy Nymira like Darian can. Maybe this is why she choses Darian at the end.

All in all this is an amazing story with a new flavour to the Queen Mother and her son trope. I enjoyed it very much. Hope you explore other settings in the mother/son category too.

This is your best work. It's raw, drenched in dreams of lust and desires.

I love it and gave every single chapter 5 stars.

The fact that you'll be finishing this saga soon fills me with sadness but also hope you might forge another medieval taboo mom/son tale!

For the work you've done so far...THANK YOU kind author.

Perhaps twins?

Sad to read part 6 will be the last part of the story. Undoubtedly this is one of the few best incest story series on literotica. All credit to the author afs4 for his concept selection and writing skills. Undoubtedly given five stars ⭐ to every part.

Even if Darian deposited his seeds forcefully in Nymira's womb, Nymira invites Nome in dawn in her chamber in castle to fuck her which is very strange. It shows Nymira more inclined towards Nome instead of Darian in terms of love and sexual relations.

As a reader we want Darian to win and fuck Nymira every time. But at the same time we read from Lokir words that physical intimacy happened between Nome and Nymira. Maybe that happened on dwan and after subsequent days as well. But I would like to read details of Nome and Nymira's physical intimacy and sexual adventure in bed. Would like to read in flashback how double boned rough buffalo Nome ride on soft cow Nymira. Nome is the first and may be last child of Nymira where Nymira having consent and willingness to fuck by her own son.

I would like to see the final part earlier on Literotica.

Let us know when or on which month we can expect the next part. Its painful to wait for such an awesome story

I'm glad you're killing it with part 6. It became a cuck story when you brought Nome back.

This type of should go on and on

I guess the final chapter should be just in time of Christmas. However if we are lucky then maybe Thanksgiving!

can't wait for the next chapter

Highly unlikable characters

Just posted finale on Patreon/Buymeacoffee. I'll post it here in a view weeks)

About "cuck" stuff. I'm not writing cuck, nor I am interested in it. It's just the way the story unfolds. Sometimes you have to lose to win. That's my perspective and that's what's going on here.

I love it. Now Darian is getting some serious pussy from his mother. I think he is going to need to kill Nome, just like his dad Englud. 5 Stars