All Comments on 'Oh, the Places She'll Go'

Obviously, my story is nothing like what happened here, which was expertly written by the way. You know, you try your best, you get in shape, you fix up your life, you fix your grades, you do everything but nobody, not your crush, your "friends", your classmates, nobody gives you the time of day. That last comment that Brandon made, "Hey Lola, let's stay friends forever!", dude, the satisfaction was crazy. I'm sorry, weird comment, I know, just felt like I wanted to share.

Keep this going!!!!

Now that her brains are gone he better provide for his breeding bimbo

I wish you had drawn out the metamorphosis a lot longer. What starts as a small endorphine rush and small craving for more should take time to build up. Having her become a bimbo in 2 hours not only loses plausibility but misses a lot of opportunities for humiliation. Instead of completely becoming a bimbo right away, she stays her same innocent self. But she's drawn to Brandon for some reason.

She says something jokingly. only mildly teasing, but Brandon gets upset and kicks her out. Why does she need to go back? Why can't she stay away? She shouldn't have to apologize. He was the one that blew up over nothing and yelled at her. Yet here she is. And of course he doesnt make it easy. In the days that follow, she visits everyday to have lunch with him. Somehow, he always has her on her heels. She always feels apologetic and small. She should just stop visiting. But she cant. And lately, He's been getting more impatient and demanding. Can you believe he had the audacity to say she should start wearing skirts all the time? Who does he think he is? Then when she didnt one day, HE got upset and kicked her out. Again. She says she is done with him. Though, he did say he wanted her to wear skirts and she didnt. Maybe she should apologize after all. And again, he makes it even more embarrassingto apologize. But that kiss... wow, made her swoon. What are they? Are they boyfriend and girlfriend now? He doesnt treat her like one. What started as a sweet if passionate kiss has turned into grabbing her chest when he kisses her, and lately he just grabs her and paws her. Though she does have to admit, it feels good. And her breasts have felt more sensitive and, strangely, bigger lately. In fact, she finds that lately shes's turned on a lot. And she couldnt tell him no. After all, she doesnt want to upset him again. But then she does end up upsetting him again. This time it wasnt her fault. She was just a bit late. I cant believe him. And a SPANKING!?! How humiliating. She was the valedictorian and one of the most popular girls in school, bending over his knee? ...

A chapter for every couple days. Having to admit her growing chest to him while hiding it from others. He starts having her subject herself to daily measurements- of course she has to be naked for them to be accurate. She doesnt want to upset him when he says he needs her to give him some relief after dealing with her being naked all the time. He WAS nice enough several days later to let her grind on his leg as she sucked him off. That was nice. Then she upsets him again when she asks why Sally was leaving (with her hair a bit messed and wearing slutty clothes) before she got there. She should know better than to question him. But demanding he be able to fuck her ass to make up for it?! No way. Except here she is, bent over for him...She just couldnt come up with a good argument not to. She's been a bit fuzzy lately.

Sometimes she wonders if maybe she's not ready for college, like he says. But he's just teasing when he says that.Right? Who knows. Maybe she should drop out and just stay with him. He was kidding, but it's not a bad idea. Though she doesnt think she could handle having to be around when Sally comes over to fuck him. After all Sally isnt his girlfriend, Lola is, right? Sally is really mean. Like when she said she might LET me watch and even "clean up afterwards". Like I'd ever want to make the bed after her. That's what she meant, right?

Great story, really enjoyed. Hoping there’s a part 2.

Brandon is 100% *not* in love with Lola. If you're offended at the idea of being friends with someone you claim to love, if your immediate thought and subsequent action at being slighted is to radically alter a human personality, that's not love, that's an obsession. Dont conflate the two just because it's fiction.

Who tf is paul