All Comments on 'Oiled roomie'

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Clever premise.

But sex is soooooo lacking in details.

One sentence saying that they fucked, and that's all, is about non-erotic as reading a shopping list.

Had real potential. Didn't deliver.

Three stars -- being generous.

AmberSolisAmberSolis4 months ago

A wonderful, sweet story! Well written, too.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very good story.

Changing_LanesChanging_Lanes3 months ago

A very good nudity story. You included the staples of early female embarrassment, and later female arousal of being seen naked by a non-lover male. A solid 4 stars.

mfj77mfj773 months ago

Fun! Nice premise. Could have been fleshed out some more. Could have used more sex, liked the idea of the dick pacifier. Fun fantasy.

bad97bad973 months ago

Please learn to use comtractions. Nobody talks like this.

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