All Comments on 'Ok I'll do It, Again Pt. 11'

by ozinsom77

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LenardSpencerLenardSpencerover 6 years ago
Not rational behaviour

Sam is a moron. But Carol having unprotected sex with a sleezy bartender was just as stupid. As is all her unprotected sex as "revenge" with paying clients in her role as an escort.

It is NOT revenge sex if her moron husband doesn't even know about it. Where is the payback there? He got an std but... she never confronts him about it. That stupid scene where she plays a video that mimics his situation, in some subtle way, is just useless. When she was "raped" by Sam and that arsehole, she sees her husband unconscious on the bed. As immediate repayment, she could have rammed him up the arse with a dildo/bottle or something and left it inserted. SHE DOES NOTHING!

He sells or posts her pics and videos online... and still she does nothing.

Your characters are just not consistant nor believable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
LMAO!

By the time you got to the end you had less than 6000 views. Which means NO ONE was reading this crap. BARF!

AngusMAngusMalmost 3 years ago

Well Sam better behave with Siobhan or he might get kneecapped by the Chicago family

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