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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Thank you for writing this. What a peaceful and graceful thing. I'm not sure how to express how much I enjoyed it

Only_connectOnly_connectover 3 years ago

A lovely story. Relaxed and natural pace, very smooth, nice writing.

"Triste" is not the correct word... coincidentally it means "sad" in French. "Tryst" would be right English word for a meeting (assignation - maybe secret - between lovers)

DevilbobyDevilboby11 months ago

This story is so beautiful it made me feel part of their lives, being in that upstairs room where we first met Francoise then Alain then Leonie then watched them all come together as lovers for that is how I think of them as a trio of equals Francoise was continually being begged by the other two to to join them, but Francoise sense of what's right kept them apart. But it could only ever be right.

Well done Max your positioning of your characters excellent. 5 stars as always

DevilbobyDevilboby11 months ago

I'm such a romantic.

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Dr. Max Cummings Born Maximilian Audacious Rollo Cummings on 29 April 1889 in what was then the British South Indies. Sent, at an early age, to boarding school in England, he moved successively from Linbury Court Prep. School to Greyfriars before matriculating, with the under...