All Comments on 'Old Friends'

by harrybalszak

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sexy Fun!

Old friends meet after a long separation and quickly fall into a foursome situation. After intensive coupling they find themselves wanting an encore. Hot!

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
Well-written spin on a familiar theme

Not entirely certain the use of a first-person narration which switches to other locations is entirely successful, but the dialogue is strong and the characterisation nicely observed. It's also interesting you chose not to have them have full sex with each other's partners, which is somewhat of a cliche; this was far more believable.

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