by Thors_Fist
Nicely over the top...and like a really good O'Henry...it has a Colombo type surprise ending that leaves you hanging wondering about the truth of the reality presented...
5 stars...
Ooops, how did I miss this story. I didn't think that you had posted anything on here in years that took me over 2 weeks to read, usually just a day or two. Well I'm going to read it now.
Well hell, you posted nearly 300 times when I loved or at least liked it. Plus a few chapters that I didn't care much for (mostly in Richard's story about becoming a cuck), but in my opinion 'This is your personal worst.'
Sorry, but I ALWAYS give my honest opinion. It cost me a few girlfriends and a few jobs over the years but I ain't changed yet.
Ernie had the last laugh on all of them. A very interesting story with a true surprise twist.