If you learn to curtail your verbosity, you might just have something. OK, that was sarcasm. The truth is, it was just starting to get good, and you stopped. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. Thanks.
Veteran and always up for a beer. Even in erotic trope, I find intrigue in exploring the interpersonal dynamics, or mental turmoil that the characters experience. You will often find a mental standoff going on in the mind of my characters that make the story unique.