All Comments on 'Older Mothers need Young Cock Ch. 02'

I would love to hear more

Personally there is a lack of action that is a turn off. The self ego narration is very tiresome

I'd enjoy reading chapter 3 if it holds as much potential as this chapter does! The guy's a fuckin Stud!

Now that you’ve developed the character, maybe you can move on to the action portion of the story...

you got a good one going. don't stop now.

Good storyline but most of all some good storytelling to me!! Good read thanks for sharing.

Yes most😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍definitely. And soon😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍💋😍

keep writing

... oh, Hell yeah!!!

First off high school football teams usually do not play 17 games in a season. Why would a coach send a player to a meeting at 11:00 PM Don't think so. You are really dragging this out and this kid sure thinks he is something special. If he is 18 and the stud qb where is his car?

Yes please write more

You’re skipping around way too much. It’s hard to keep up. Tell us about Mrs. Chin.

please get another update out soon

I appreciate all the positive words and suggestions about teen stud Brad Rafferty and his penchant to screw attractive older women.

I certainly will consider all your comments in the next chapter - Chapter 3

Happy to see this continued and I hope you have some pay off soon

1) Try to update it faster so we can keep interest

2) the style of story this is a sort of ridiculous, over the top and turn you brains off style. Build up is good but it really sufferers if there's too much. And if you build it up too much, there's no way the pay off (sex scenes) will be worth it. So get to the hot sex that has been told about but not shown (even in simple porn stories the rule of show don't tell still applies)

And 3) describe their breasts. May be I missed it if u did but u say their age, weight and height but nothing on their breasts which u could debate is the most important detail.

Good storyline, good description of his conquests. But can Improve the stoy a lot if there was a more detailed narration about his conquests.

YES ! Yes ! We eagerly await the next few chapters..

Is there ever a part 3 coming? With any sex?

I need more of this!!!!

This story has many directions it can go.....please continue!!

So much potential here so unfortunate to see that you have seemingly abandoned writing Chapter

3.

I have really enjoyed reading your stories and would very much like to read more chapters of your excellent writing style. Please continue