All Comments on 'Oliver's Corruption Pt. 01'

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interdictrinterdictrabout 3 years ago

Loved it. I can't wait for more!

Saqwana1Saqwana1about 3 years ago

i would love to know why males would continue to exist when females have both genetically.

MiciaGurlMiciaGurlabout 3 years ago

Excellent first story

Please don't make us wait for the next chapter.

Mx

RorurkaRorurkaabout 3 years ago

Great start !!

Can't wait for the next chapter <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I wanna read more!

oshirixxxaioshirixxxaiabout 3 years ago

So fucking hot. No way you can top that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I await in eager expectations for the continuation of this exciting story. Please don't tarry long. Really enjoyed the read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I fucking loved it! Well written! Hope in chapter 2, Oliver teases his friends and sister to the point where, like his mother, they can't take it any longer! That's the perfect approach imo :)

Client8Client8almost 3 years ago

Not bad. A bit too cliché with the virgin thing and mommy-dom. Good start, sorry there's no followup

Futalover32Futalover32almost 3 years ago

Please, please, please continue this story

Futalover32Futalover32almost 3 years ago

This was awesome! I really hope you continue this story, I love the role reversal and that some clothes are unisex like panties and camisoles. Oliver is the perfect boy, he seems so sweet and his obliviousness to his actions is the cutest touch. If anything I hope there’s more of his friends and people around him ogling his ass and I hope something develops between him and Ava or Isabellla.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Ok. I just read the prologue and I already want to be a typical boy in that kind of a world. Its such a wonderful world.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Omfg! I'm I love with this story. I beg you to write more! Please! I think in the next one you introduce the sister, which would be great but I'm very excited about when he will tag teamed by his two bestfriends. I hope you bring that one very soon

KallamezKallamezalmost 3 years ago

Please, write more

HotAss4UHotAss4Ualmost 3 years ago

What a fantastic wonderful beautiful story. Please, more. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please continue, I'd like to see what sis has planned

RorurkaRorurkaover 2 years ago

Please continue this story it's too good

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue writing the story it's aready very good and has so much more potential. I loved it. Hot

CasualnagaCasualnagaabout 2 years ago

This story might be a one off.

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