All Comments on 'Olivia and Derrick Ch. 04'

Gurl, you are the queen of short chapters and cliff hangers. You could be a writer for soap operas.

I love this series can't wait for more honestly!!

I agree with StMaartenFreak. Loving this story but the length of of the chapter made me a little frustrated knowing it would be a few weeks until the next one. I will still wait patiently for chapter five.

I really love this series but its disappointing how long you take to update. I know that you have a life and all lol but waiting several weeks for a story that is only one page long is a huge turn off. Four stars ****

That dream was hott. Nice one. Pls keep writing and do something to mak that bitch of a roommate shut up. I think olivia is going to run away from Derrick when he comes for her.love this story so cool. I lik that her friend said she likes him too but will stay away just for her. Thats a real best friend. Im glad i have one of thoses.

Im so happy i been waiting for this lol.very hot sex scence im lovingthis story so more again please