All Comments on 'Olivia Ch. 01'

Do you really not know when to use "your" and when to use "you're"?

Clue - 'you're' is a shortened version of "you are". The apostrophe indicates a missing letter - in this case 'a'.

Just mentally use the long form and you should get it right.

Seriously, you need to find an editor. Too many spelling and grammatical errors.