All Comments on 'On Another World Ch. 03'
by DragonSlayer_OK
- 12 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agoThe story continues to unfold quite well, as DS continues to adapt to this new world. Please keep your submissions coming.
gmccabe01over 13 years agoLove the way the story is unfolding please keep
them coming.
Again excellent and thanks for takeing the time to write and post for our enjoyment
Anonymousover 13 years agoExcellent, I can't wait for the next. I just don't want to stop reading and it is hard to stop when the chapter ends.
Anonymousover 13 years agoYour doing good things!! There are few stories like this and I try to read them all. If my words help, then know I would LOVE to see the end of this.
Anonymousover 13 years agoAs a compliment, I will explain it like this. When I see another chapter of this story, I get excited and stop everything until it is read. In my busy life, there can be no greater praise. Keep writing and Thank You.
tiokover 13 years agoI just read chapters 1-3 at one sitting. You got me hooked...very nice story. I anxiously await #4. Often this kind of tale becomes boring and repetitive by this point. You continue to have my interest.
Anonymousover 13 years agoA really great story. Keep up the good work. Thanks for the intertainment.
Anonymousover 13 years agoThis is interesting. Are you planning on writing more? Well good job so far.
polgaranightabout 12 years agoA glutton for punishment this boy has, but ya gotta luv him. Getting all these women and then falling in luv with them just makes my heart feel warm. He is so protective of them all and he treats them all (I mean everyone) with respect and like they are people, not slaves.
polgaranightabout 12 years agoA glutton for punishment this boy has, but ya gotta luv him. Getting all these women and then falling in luv with them just makes my heart feel warm. He is so protective of them all and he treats them all (I mean everyone) with respect and like they are people, not slaves.
Anonymousover 8 years agoFirst, let me say "Thank You" for this fine story. I am enjoying it very much.
The name of the main character reminds me of Stephen R Donaldson, author of Lord Foul's Bane. Is that mere coincidence? I am a fan of the Thomas Covenant trilogy and see some appealing similarities in the writing and story line.
I realize my question is rhetorical by default, since I don't get have an account. I will get to that.
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