All Comments on 'On Another World Ch. 06'

by DragonSlayer_OK

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Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Damn cliff hanger!! You suck!! Awesome story so far man.. Only noticed one misspelled word, so your new software seemed to do a decent job, and editor of course...

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Awesome

Just read all 6 installments and wanted to say thanks for posting. This story is shaping up to be one of my favorites here on lit. Keep up the good work!

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Dang

Cliff hanger is correct. This is shaping up to be an awesome story.

Please don't leave us hanging.

Kman4 almost 13 years ago

Very good so far

Very enjoyable so far, and an interesting predicament he is getting himself into.

Please keep writing more chapters :)

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