All Comments on 'On Display: Slut at the Library'

This is an exhibitionism story and has little to do with BDSM besides the use of clothespins to heighten the feelings while exhibiting 'yourself'.

So apart from being in the wrong category, this story is fun and shows promise.

If this is a 'faction' story it's pretty cool that you are silly enough to do such things, AND clever enough to write pretty well about it. ;-)

Anyway, I have to go to the library now, but maybe next time you could get an editor? (Um, or a better editor? *cringes*)

While I agree this story might have been better placed in the exhibitionist section, she certainly likes the degredation and humiliation S and M delivers.

I thought this story was quite creative and unique- whether it's true or fantasy, I enjoyed it.

I hope you degrade yourself further and have a chance to write about it.

very erotic cant wait for more chapters

The thought of doing what you did by crawling under the stalls naked when you could have been caught was such a turn on!!! You have inspired me to do the same so hope you dont mind me copying a few of the things youve done. Cant wait!!!

Too bad you stopped writing, this is very good material.

fuck, that was sooo good

I love your stories. I love to be "forced" too. You have more brave than i. Keep up the stories please. I would love to exchange some dares.