All Comments on 'On Her Majesty's Secretarial Service'

Great story! Well done!

Very nice with a great twist at the end.

10 big blazing stars for a fun read, and delightful story. Thank You for your effort. Just because it is short doesn;t mean that you didn't put a lot of effort into your story. Thanks Buster2U

Nice job hitting many Bond plot points. Bravo for using Timothy Dalton and Caroline Bliss, they’re my favorite Bond and Moneypenny too. Mentioned the latter as among Carey Lowell’s past hookups in my lesbian orgy Closer Than Six Degrees. :) Liked the plot also. Overall great story! :)

Great story, indeed. Just my 2 cents worth, though. Lois Maxwell, the original, while not being the best looking, is still my favorite Moneypenny.

Clever use of Bond legend. I picture Lois Maxwellas Moneypenny. She portrayed a moonstruck secretary the best. Maybe other episodes will come in future.