All Comments on 'On My Teacher's Bed'

1. She's not a whore if she's not getting paid.

2. Grammar needs checking - words need completing

3. Bragging about hitting women makes you a cunt and not the good kind.

If there's not then there should be.

"Andy ringed the bell to Miss Hobbes' house"

You have to be joking!

Andy rang the bell.

You write like a 12 year old.

The story was crass and a total clichè.

And not well written at all.

Please stop.

RE: Anonymous

"she's not a whore if she's getting paid"

No, she is, whores are prostitutes, that's what they do.