All Comments on 'On the Beach'

shot down by terrible writing.<p>I mean, please, did you even do a cursory proofreading?<p>I gave you some credit for the concept, but criminey, get an editor.

Maybe its just me, but I didn't really notice or care about any grammatical mistakes. I thought it read well as a brief quickie of a story. Then again I spent more time picturing the events than proofreading the copy.

I read to enjoy the story and that I did.!! Thought it was a great story and I could just picture it down to the last slide off.!! "hehe" Sorry the rest did not enjoy as much as I did. Thanks 'guy'.!!!! JAG/TSO