All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 21'

Epilogue

That’s the end of the summer romance. Will it continue back in Virginia? Who knows?

Thank you all for your votes, comments and the more than 200 emails that I received as my story of Murphy and Bill unfolded.

I hope that those impatient, one-handed typists of the sticky keyboard ilk were also able to get some pleasure out of this story.

I am pleased that I have been able to entertain you and to be able to take your mind to another place where you can suspend your sense of reality for a few minutes while you read and enjoy my stories.

Kathi

I loved the entire series. I hope that it continues in Virginia and that Bill and Murphy continue their romance. Please keep it going into part II.

more please

awesome

Do you think maybe going on with this, using the female life guard seducing older men at the beach.

I enjoyed each and every episode as it unfolded. I would encourage you to continue their adventures back in Virginia, with Bill finally getting Murphy in "The End"!

I really enjoyed this storyline and with great anticipation, I would check each day for the newest installment. I've kinda been going through "withdrawals" after it ended. Anxiously awaiting your next series!

The story was sexy, but what made it great was that the characters felt real.

I like the story and want more of it. I think you combine some of the chapters and make more pages in the chapters. I hope you will be adding more to this.

I was getting sad about the ending but the last bit cheered me up again. A lovely story, thank you.

Two people ,' giving '& ' getting ', what they always wanted. The jigsaw, finally set. A completion , of love.

The subtle 'incestuous' undertone, at the end, was nicely done. It gave the message without 'overpowering' the - Mature- category.

Wonderful. I liked the message & the romance.

Kathi rules. lol.

5 STARS ,sans the tan-lines. lol.

BTW ,That's 21x5 , obviously.

Just read the full series. Congratulations you write well with feelings and love.