All Comments on 'On the Low Futon Bed'

by ElectricBlue

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BazzleBazzleabout 2 months ago

Hot, really hot.

Just because this week peeps have complained about my typos...

Are the two cases of lower case "you're" on purpose?

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 2 months ago

Very arousing!

Cheers

SAGE

AG31AG31about 2 months ago

Beautiful simple erotica!!!!! 5 stars, of course.

LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeabout 2 months ago

Short vignettes don't get much better than that.

cmj711cmj711about 2 months ago

Mmm, I was able to feel this, what a delight. Thank you. 💋

LlehllaLlehllaabout 2 months ago

“My name my name my name”… what a beautiful touch, the rhythmic repetition of the most intimate word…one’s name,

MountainMiscellanistMountainMiscellanistabout 1 month ago

Beautiful, as always. Thank you.

Helen1899Helen189918 days ago

Wonderful, I wish you could make love to me. After reading that, I am so wet for u, you could find me if you really wanted me, I don't believe that your trying. 5*

triplefliptripleflip13 days ago

I probably shouldn't comment, but I will anyway. It's as if the story had been written for me. It is realistic and believable. In my experience hose characteristics tend to be rare here. I am glad I found this author. A good author like this makes all the other stories better.

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.

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