All Comments on 'On the Night Train to Mandalay'

Another well written story, but there’s something vaguely unsatisfying about the ending. It’s not the actual ending: that’s a great last paragraph. But it feels like it should have gone further. I suppose that’s the limitation of 750 words. Overall, it’s a good read, with a great central image.

Such a wonderful description, a job well done

There's a fuller variant of this scene that will post to Literotica in a few days in chapter one of "Extreme Gay Thailand, 1978."