All Comments on 'On The Road Again'

This one's a bit rough in places, sorry guys. I hope y'all got the gist of it, though.

Always leave them wanting more! :)

You have a deft and constantly surprising turn of phrase, El Folo my friend. This is a lot of different things - disconcerting, moving, impressionistic... Maybe a little too elusive overall, but then it has the feeling that there's a fuller story to be told, a road to be followed further. Is that your intention? At any rate, this smacks of an exciting new talent on the writing scene. I hope to read more from you and soon.