All Comments on 'On The Road with Sister'

Nasty big sister, part 2?

The fuck is wrong with you anon, tongue his ass til she vomits?you need to talk to a shrink cause that is just fucked up.

Depict more on pussy-smashing would be better.

More please!

This was very good. It will get even better as the story unfolds.

Yes, a very hot pair; brother and sister - she is very loving and now knows he can screw her well. I hope while on the road, they find a nice bed and bang each other a few times senseless. More body details would be better but a nice loving theme. Her brother should let her teach him and then when they get home they can take advantage of that new knowledge. Yes, we need more about this lusty trip and maybe romance between them. Thank you.

Though the introduction was a bit confusing. It was quickly sorted out, was even with the typos, it was understandable. Could use more character development, like why sister was open to this with her brother. Shukria~ Thanks for sharing. 4* Slianté

The story is fun and I like the exotic locale.

The comments from some of the moronic readers are hilarious.

Get her to narrate her second hard cock train encounter in the next chapter.

You can tell English isn’t primary language but it’s a great story. It’s not like it’s from ignorance. I’d read another chapter in a heart beat. (Or beet) 😈

Several typos and such, but a decent story. Please proof-read, nothing worse than having to re-read a sentence in an erotic story...

nice flow to this story, I enjoyed it and want more.A

I liked your story, but it desperately needs an editor. There are people on this site that offer such services. Otherwise, keep up the good work!

What an AWESOME story. Hope you continue the series.

Think of the places they fuck.

Will they continue?

I have been always into incest. This was a great story. Expecting more stories of the sorry from you.

when Isla was going to let that stranger fuck her before he suddenly came on her thighs, ruined the whole story. She's just a whore bitch.

I agree with "legallysane" just ruined if when she talked about the stranger

Count me in agreement with Tiku21 and LegallySane. I can't enjoy a story if I have no respect for one of the main characters. 😕 Isla is just a worthless slut since she was willing to let a total stranger fuck her in public like that. Hell, at least a whore would have made the stranger pay for the privilege. 3/5