On Vacation - An X-Change Novella Ch. 02

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Four thousand, two hundred and fifty nine dollars and seventy nine cents. Four thousand, two hundred and fifty nine dollars and seventy nine cents. The only bright side was that I was told that it could have easily been three times that amount. So, I said Yes to the Dress. I went to the bridal store with Rebecca, Abby, Peri, and Angela. A former girlfriend, two woman having an affair together and my former shrink. Not knowing or caring about the approach to bridal dress shopping, I basically let the four of them fight it out. I did enjoy shopping for the bridal ensemble from Victoria's Secret.

Look, I've seen the pictures. I was a cover girl quality gorgeous bride. And I was glowing. If you took my best moments as Jason...winning the state math Olympiad, hitting a walk off homer in my junior year, getting laid for the first time, getting accepted into my first choice college, and even the day I met Danny, and rolled them into one bright light, they still would get eclipsed by my wedding day...and night. Oh yeah, we were now used to each other. I could make him cum two to three times a night and he returned the favor by producing four or five orgasms.

Six months later, I peed on a little plastic contraption and learned that I could never go back to being Jason, and I was pregnant. Today, I'm lying on our couch, ignoring a baseball game on TV. I'm fat, I'm slow, I'm hideous, and I'm happier than I've ever been.

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Super super super fantastic story I couldn't stop once it's going I could not stop jerking off it is fantastic I'm glad they got back together and they have a good happy family it's super super super super story

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great. The ending I hoped for!! I love love!!!

kuu123kuu123about 1 year ago

Really lked ch1, ch2 just didnĀ“t work for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow! Just wow!

GynoidG1R1GynoidG1R1almost 3 years ago

I think this is a beautiful story and it perfectly captures my struggles with gender identity, intense feelings for male friends, and desire to be a complete woman. What attracts women like me to X-Change stories is escapism from the realities of the limitations we can do with the bodies we were born into. That we can become the hot woman we dreamed we could be. That we can switch off the artificial dominance that we've developed as a survival mechanism and be the personality (sexually and otherwise) we feel more comfortable with. And yes even become a mother.

Gender dysphoria is not a well paved highway with everyone traveling the same direction. Each journey to our trans-self is different and unique. Everyone is entitled to their stories and fantasies without being kink shamed. Even if the dream is to become a "Stepford wife" married to a lawyer, pregnant on the couch.

There is no bigotry here; just a story that needs editing. There's some issues of transition, "telling instead of showing", and punctuation. But these can be easily fixed and your skill will shine through with the brightness of Jaci on her wedding day.

You have an amazing plot and in Jason and Danny you have strong characters that drew me into the story and invested me into them. If you worked with an editor (and I'd volunteer to help) you have the basis for at least two (maybe three) novels.

Please keep writing. :)

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