by sasafrass
This wasnt' one of those cheesy vampire stories..it was actually very well written. It was hot, erotic but personal. It gave a realistic approach to it. Well done.
This was an excellent story, Hope you continue on with this story.
Please write another part where he visits her again when she is pregnant with his child. I love pregnant sex. hmmm
Very well done!! Hanging on every word. Please continue this storyline if at all possible. Thank you.
I can only hope you continue the story it was very erotic ans well written
I just loved it when she gotten impregnated! You write really good and I'm gonna check more frequent on the things you write!! Keep writing like this, I love it!
I loved this story, I think it's great! It's very well written and I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Keep up the great work!