All Comments on 'Once Bitten'

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_Lady1SensuaL1Fire__Lady1SensuaL1Fire_over 18 years ago
Loved it

This wasnt' one of those cheesy vampire stories..it was actually very well written. It was hot, erotic but personal. It gave a realistic approach to it. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent

This was an excellent story, Hope you continue on with this story.

SEX_VAMPYRESEX_VAMPYREover 18 years ago
I loved this story

Please write another part where he visits her again when she is pregnant with his child. I love pregnant sex. hmmm

barepussloverbarepussloverover 18 years ago
Very Nice!! Well Written!!!

Very well done!! Hanging on every word. Please continue this storyline if at all possible. Thank you.

michael_op1michael_op1over 18 years ago
Great Story

I can only hope you continue the story it was very erotic ans well written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
GREAT!!!

I just loved it when she gotten impregnated! You write really good and I'm gonna check more frequent on the things you write!! Keep writing like this, I love it!

luv2bemeluv2bemealmost 14 years ago
AWESOME!

It's an awesome story! Well Written!

kinkyangelkinkyangelalmost 14 years ago
Incredible!

I loved this story, I think it's great! It's very well written and I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Keep up the great work!

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